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Revision Week 2 (M)

Description: Rev Week 2 (M)
Number of Questions: 15
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Tags: Rev Week 2 (M) Idioms and Phrases Verb Parallelism Others Confusing Adjectives of Comparison
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Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Neither the students nor their teacher or the school came forward to tender an apology.

  1. Neither the students nor their teacher or the school came forward to tender an apology.

  2. None of the students or their teacher or the school came forward to tender an apology.

  3. Neither the students nor their teacher nor the school came forward to tender an apology.

  4. Neither the students nor their teacher nor even the school came forward to tender an apology.

  5. None including the students, their teacher, or the school came forward to tender an apology.


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

Explanation for (1): The usage of neither is incorrect in this sentence. 'Neither'' can be used as a standalone, or be followed by 'nor', but as per the rules of parallelism nor cannot be substituted the next time by 'or'. Also, since there are three subjects, the choice of 'neither... nor' is inappropriate.

Explanation for (2): The sentence has error of redundancy, 'or' before the teacher is inappropriate.

Explanation for (3): The sentence has error of redundancy, 'nor' before the teacher is inappropriate
Explanation for (4): Since there are three subjects, the choice of 'neither... nor' is inappropriate Justification for (5): 'Neither'' can be used as a standalone, or be followed by 'nor', but as per the rules of parallelism nor cannot be substituted the next time by 'or'. Also, since there are three subjects, the choice of 'neither... nor' is inappropriate. This option rectifies the error of parallelism by using 'none'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

During the Miss Universe contest, it was a difficult moment for judges to decide whether Miss India or Miss Greece is the most beautiful.

  1. to decide whether Miss India or Miss Greece is the most beautiful

  2. to decide as to whether Miss India or Miss Greece is the most beautiful

  3. to decide whether Miss India or Miss Greece is more beautiful

  4. to decide whether Miss India or Miss Greece was more beautiful

  5. to decide whether Miss India or Miss Greece were beautiful


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

Explanation for (1): The sentence bears error of comparison and tense. When comparison is drawn comparative degree is used but in this sentence superlative degree has been used. The first part of the sentence is in past tense, the latter should also be in past tense not in present tense.

Explanation for (2): This option does not rectify the error of comparison and introduces another error by inserting 'as to' before 'whether'.

Explanation for (3): The option rectifies the error of comparison but does not rectify the error of tense.
Justification for (4): The sentence bears error of comparison and tense. When comparison is drawn, comparative degree is used but in this sentence superlative degree has been used. Also, the first part of the sentence is in past tense, the latter should also be in past tense not in present tense. This option rectifies both the errors. Explanation for (5): The option does not rectify the error of comparison and also introduces error of subject verb agreement (use of were: when two singular subjects are joined by 'or', singular verb is required).

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others. The colonists developed their own social affairs and managed their own civil affairs according to the exigencies of the case and democracy's principles.

  1. according to the exigencies of the case and democracy's principle.

  2. according to the exigencies of the case and the principles of democracy.

  3. in accordance with the exigencies of the case and the principals of democracy.

  4. according to the exigencies of the case and the principles that are used in democracy.


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Explanation for (1): The sentence bears error of parallelism and the possessive. The usage should be 'exigencies of the case and the principles of democracy'

Justification for (2): This option rectifies the error of the parallelism and the possessive by bringing both parts of the sentence in similar construction (exigencies of the case and the principles of democracy).

Explanation for (3): The option can be safely eliminated as it changes the meaning of the sentence. Mark the replacement of 'principles' with 'principals'.
Explanation for (4): The option does not rectify the error of parallelism. Explanation for (5): This option rectifies the error of the parallelism and the possessive, but incorrectly changes 'according to' to 'in accordance to'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others. The winding roads of the hill town were less in number than the nearby town in the plains.

  1. were less in number than the nearby town in the plains.

  2. were less in number than those nearby town in the plains.

  3. were fewer in number than that of the nearby town in the plains.

  4. were fewer in number than those of the nearby town in the plains.


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

Explanation for (1): The sentence contains two errors. First, there is a faulty comparison. As constructed, the sentence makes an attempt to compare the number of winding roads of the hill town with the other. But the comparison should be between “roads” and “roads”. Second, when referring to discrete quantities, items that can be counted, we use the words “fewer” and “fewest” rather than “less” and “least”.

Explanation for (2): The option makes no coherent sense.

Explanation for (3): Roads are plural, so 'that' is inappropriate for comparison.
Justification for (4): This option correctly compares “roads” and “roads” and uses “fewer” in place of “less” Explanation for (5): The option makes no coherent sense.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others. In the last three hundred years, man has created a magnificent industrial society, produced machines that do much of the work for him and has gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe.

  1. has gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe

  2. an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe has been gathered

  3. gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe

  4. gathering in the process an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Explanation for (1): The usage of 'has' gathered is incorrect as it does not continue with the parallel construction of the sentence.

Explanation for (2): This option compounds the error of parallel construction by converting the underlined clause into passive voice.

Justification for (3): This option corrects the error of parallelism. (has created…produced… gathered)
Explanation for (4): This option does not correct the error of parallelism. (has created…produced… gathering) Explanation for (5): This option corrects the error of parallelism. (has created…produced…gathering)

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got over with my brother but with time we turned buddies.

  1. Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got over with my brother but with time we turned buddies.

  2. Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got up with my brother but with time we turned buddies.

  3. Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got on with my brother but with time we turned buddies.

  4. Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got by with my brother but with time we turned buddies.

  5. Although, I and my brother are twins but I never got in with my brother but with time we turned buddies.


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Option (3) is grammatically the most correct option because 'got on' means 'to continue on harmonious terms'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

I have adopted in this work the method which I think most suitable, proceeding analytically from common knowledge to the determination of its ultimate principle.

  1. I have adopted in this work the method which I think most suitable

  2. I have adopted in this work the method which I think the more suitable

  3. I have adopted in this work the method which I think is the most suitable

  4. I have adopted in this work the method which I think was more suitable

  5. I had adopted in this work the method which I thought was the most suitable


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

The sentence bears error of article and auxiliary verb. Definite article 'the' should be used before superlative degree. And auxiliary verb 'is' is also needed after 'think'. This option rectifies both the errors.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

According to the police reports, some unidentified persons broke in the house last night and stole the jewellery, damaged the paintings and electronics and kill the pet.

  1. some unidentified persons broke in the house last night and stole the jewellery, damaged the paintings and electronics and kill the pet.

  2. some unidentified persons broken in the house last night and stole the jewellery, damaged the paintings and electronics and killed the pet.

  3. some unidentified persons broke in the house last night and stole the jewellery, damaged the paintings and electronics, and killed the pet.

  4. some unidentified persons broke in the house last night and stole the jewellery, damaged the paintings and electronics and killed the pet.


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Option (3) is grammatically the most correct option. (1) (2) and (5) are incorrect because of wrong parallel construction (correct is 'broke…stole…damaged…killed'). (4) is incorrect because of a punctuation error. Correct usage is '…the paintings and electronics, and killed the pet'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Many experts on the Middle-East assert that the only way to bring stability and peace in the region is to ensure personal liberty and equitable distribution of resources in the region.

  1. assert that the only way to bring stability and peace in the region is to ensure

  2. have asserted the only way stability and peace can be brought in the region is by ensuring

  3. assert that the only way to bringing stability and peace is by ensuring

  4. have asserted the only way to bring stability and peace in the region is to ensure

  5. assert that the only way for bringing of peace and stability in the region is to ensure


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Correct. The sentence is correct. There is proper use of subjunctive in the option. Also, the option is parallel in construction; 'to bring' and 'to ensure' are parallel.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Studies on extraordinarily high immunity levels of mole-rats can be applied to health problems ranging from the spread of viral infection within a group to HIV+ people being most susceptible to infections.

  1. to HIV+ people being most susceptible to infections

  2. and HIV+ people being most susceptible to infections

  3. to HIV+ people who are most susceptible to infections

  4. to the susceptibility towards infection of people who are HIV+

  5. to the susceptibility of infection to people who are HIV+


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

Correct. The option maintains correct parallelism between 'from the spread of viral infection' and 'to the susceptibility of HIV+ people'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The members of European Union want to determine whether the EU can collect crude oil import needs figures of all member states, negotiate collectively with the suppliers, and devise a method by which they can be billed, depending upon their purchase quantity.

  1. devise a method by which they can be billed, depending

  2. devise a method by which it can be billed, depending

  3. devise a method by which to bill the member nations which depends

  4. bill the member nations according to a pre-devised method that depends

  5. devise a method with which the member nations can be billed, depending


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the error of dangling modifier by replacing 'they' with 'member states'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

A study of the way a society treats its elderly population can tell us many things about that society including the value of morals, degree of sensitivity towards unproductive members, level of spiritual maturity, and quality of life in general.

  1. the value of morals, degree of sensitivity towards unproductive members, level of spiritual maturity

  2. a measure of its moral values, degree of sensitivity towards unproductive members, level of spiritual maturity

  3. its moral values, degree of sensitivity towards unproductive members, level of spiritual maturity

  4. its moral values, its degree of sensitivity towards unproductive members, its level of spiritual maturity

  5. a measure of its moral values, a sensitivity towards unproductive members, a level of spiritual maturity


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the error of parallelism by using 'measure of' parallel to 'degree of', 'level of' and 'quality of'. Also, the unidiomatic construction of the original sentence is rectified.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The election campaign of Barack Obama and Joe Biden, who became the first Black President of United States, has become the subject of a case study at many prominent B-Schools.

  1. of Barack Obama and Joe Biden, who became the first Black President of United States, has become

  2. of Barack Obama, who became the first Black President of United States, and Joe Biden became

  3. of Barack Obama, who became the first Black President of United States, and Joe Biden, has become

  4. waged by Barack Obama and Joe Biden, who became the first Black President of United States, have become

  5. of Joe Biden and Barack Obama, who became the first Black President of United States, has become


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the Error of Dangling Modifier by specifying who, of the two protagonists, became the first Black President of United States.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Some psychiatrists say that the symptoms of Persecution Mania are more closely analogous to those of Schizophrenia - a disease characterized by disconnect from reality - than to Paranoia.

  1. that the symptoms of Persecution Mania are more closely analogous to those of Schizophrenia- a disease characterized by disconnect from reality- than to Paranoia

  2. that Persecution Mania is more closely analogous to Schizophrenia - than to Paranoia

  3. that the symptoms of Persecution Mania are more closely analogous to those of Schizophrenia - a disease characterized by disconnect from reality - than those of Paranoia

  4. that the symptoms of Persecution Mania are more closely analogous to those of Schizophrenia - a disease characterized by disconnect from reality -as they are to Paranoia

  5. that the symptoms of Paranoia, Persecution Mania and Schizophrenia are closely analogous to each other


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the Error of Incorrect Comparison by comparing the symptoms of two diseases with the symptoms of another disease.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Some forest dwelling tribes in Indonesia, like some tribes in Africa, have matrilineal societies in which females take on rights and responsibilities like heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, and to cultivate the fields, and rearing children as well.

  1. rights and responsibilities like heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, and to cultivate the fields

  2. rights, and responsibilities of heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, cultivating the fields

  3. roles that confer rights and responsibilities like heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, cultivating the fields

  4. roles that confer rights and responsibilities like heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, cultivating

  5. rights and responsibilities like heading the tribe, inheriting family wealth, cultivating the fields


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the error of parallelism by using 'cultivating' to parallel 'heading', 'inheriting' and 'rearing' and the error of redundancy by deleting the conjunction.

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