If he is addicted to the fine arts or to pure science instead of to trade and finance

If he is addicted to the fine arts or to the pure science instead of to trade and finance

If he is addicted of the fine arts or of pure science instead of trade and finance

If he is addicted to fine arts or to pure science rather than to trade and finance

If a man is indolent let him be poor - if he is drunken, let him be poor -  if he is addicted to the fine arts or to pure science instead of to trade and finance, let him be poor - if he does not conform, let him be poor.

If a man is indolent let him be poor, if he is drunken, let him be poor, if he is addicted to the fine arts or to pure science instead of to trade and finance, let him be poor, if he does not conform, let him be poor.

If a man is indolent let him be poor; if he is drunken, let him be poor; if he is addicted to the fine arts or to pure science instead of to trade and finance, let him be poor; if he does not conform, let him be poor.

If a man is indolent let him be poor, if he is drunken, let him be poor, if he is addicted to the fine arts or to pure science instead of to trade and finance, let him be poor and if he does not conform, let him be poor.

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Sentence (3)

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Sentence (8)

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there is no reason that students should not become good useful citizens

there is no reason because students should not become good useful citizens

there is no reason why students should not become good, useful citizens

there is no reason why students do not become good useful citizens

But we need not be depressed as most of the students are yet in their teens.

But we need not be depressed for the reason that most of the students are yet in their teens.

But we need not be depressed simply because most of the students are yet in their teens.

But we need not be depressed because most of the students are yet in their teens.

Politicians

Academicians

Students

Teacher-politicians

Attacked

Assuaged

Beset

Gripped

A spirit of rebellion and challenge is now in the air.

The nature of the students has undergone a sea-change.

Education today is much changed.

The student community is upset.

both of individual anxiety and frustration, and of social instability and unrest.

of both individual anxiety and frustration, and social instability and unrest.

both of individual anxiety and frustration; and social instability and unrest.

of both individual anxiety and frustration, and of social instability and unrest.

against ill health; unemployment; widowhood; old age

against ill health; against unemployment; against widowhood, and against old age

against ill health, unemployment, widowhood, and against old age

against ill health, against unemployment, against widowhood, against old age

A man cannot be a good citizen nor he can do himself justice as an individual

A man cannot be a good citizen nor can he do himself justice as an individual

A man cannot be a good citizen or be a good justice as an individual

Neither a man can be a good citizen nor do himself justice as an individual

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By deleting �This is�

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A description of steps already taken by the state.

A description of steps needed to be taken by the state.

A description of the scenario if adequate steps are not taken by the state.

A description of historical past of other societies.

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The mere and naked material of nature we eye with indifference.

The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in deference.

The mere and naked material of nature we eye with deference.

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Therefore

And

Although

And then

So who do you think is the culprit?

So who is gracious and mannerly ultimately?

So the shoe is on the other foot

So who will judge the 'civility'?

Researchers in education has of recent years turned their attention to

Researchers in education have of recent years turned their attention to

Research in education has in recent years turned its attention to

Research in education has of recent years turned attention to

and students helped to recognize their difficulties and overcome it.

and the students helped to recognize their difficulties and overcome it.

and a student helped to recognize his many a difficulty and overcome it.

and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome them.

And yet

Although

In spite of

Despite that

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The student's performance

The recommendation

The interview

The examination system

The sooner we find a way to dispense with these, the better it is for the student community and the system at large.

But isn't examination system the real culprit?

Yet, we have to give the devil its due.

They should all be replaced by text books.