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Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

She hurt her arm as well as breaking her leg.

  1. had broken

  2. broke

  3. break

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Case of parallelism under past indefinite tense. 'Hurt' is a verb, and needs to be followed with another verb. So, we need to replace 'breaking' (a gerund form) with 'broke' (past of break).

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Alice bathed, dressed, took breakfast and was going out.

  1. went out

  2. had gone out

  3. is going out

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of parallelism under past indefinite tense. 'Bathed', 'dressed', etc. need to be followed by second form of the verb. Thus, 'went out'.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Gandhiji, the father of the nation, was living a simple life.

  1. had lived

  2. lived

  3. is living

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

This is a statement of a fact of past. Case of past indefinite tense. And in such cases we use second form of the verb (without any auxilary).

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The weather was fine, they decided to have a picnic.

  1. being fine

  2. is fine

  3. it being fine

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

This is a complex sentence. The former part is a verb of being case and the latter part is a verb of action case. So, the correct formation of the former part is - ''The weather being fine..........''.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence three possible substitutions are given for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The chairman, got to his feet, rebuked the protesting members who disturbed the meeting.

  1. getting to his feet

  2. was getting to his feet

  3. get to his feet

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The words “got to his feet” form a parenthetical clause which acts as a complement to the subject. It has a wrong construction in the given sentence because it requires a participle and that too a present participle which is nothing but “getting”. Hence (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Ashoka, conquered Kalinga, decided not to fight any more wars.

  1. being conquered Kalinga

  2. having conquered Kalinga

  3. was conquered Kalinga

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Case of perfect participle which either makes use of “having + third form” or ”having been + third form”. The sentence implies that 'Ashoka, after conquering Kalinga.........'. Thus, option 2 is the correct usage.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence three possible substitutions are given for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

He is efficient, hardworking and conscientiously.

  1. conscientious

  2. with conscience

  3. with conscientious

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

“Conscientiously” is an adverb while the words preceding it are adjectives. Keeping the similarity, all should be adjectives and the adjective of “conscientiously” is “conscientious”. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The police did not, yet, succeed in arresting him.

  1. however

  2. but

  3. though

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

'Yet' is used when it is preceded by the conjunction “though “and in the given sentence no such conjunction has been used “However” is a sentence linker and as such is most suited in the given sentence. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

He lifted the precious treasure gently, reverently and cautious.

  1. cautiously

  2. with cautiously

  3. with cautious

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of parallelism. Before the incorrect word “cautious”, the two words “gently” and “reverently” are adverbs. The adverb form of “cautious” should be used and is ”cautiously”. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

As soon as the minister began to speak, the demonstrators were rushing to the platform.

  1. rushed

  2. had rushed

  3. were being rushed

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

It s a complex sentence. The principle clause is in past indefinite, so the subordinate clause should also be in the same tense.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The Arabs, who were being training by British officers, fought against the Germans.

  1. were trained

  2. had trained

  3. has trained

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The subordinate clause in the given sentence indicates a passive voice sentence. In a passive voice sentence, the third form of the verb is used. The sentence is a passive voice sentence because the subject “The Arabs” have been acted upon. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

What India stands for peace should be known to everybody.

  1. That

  2. Thus

  3. There

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The given sentence belongs to the Noun clause. “What” is an interrogative pronoun / adjective which is used for writing interrogative sentences or exclamatory sentences when a sudden expression of feelings / ideas is made. However the given sentence requires “that” and not “what” to make it a complete subordinate clause of the main clause and to act as the subject of the verb “should”. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

They waved, they cheered, they were shouting words of welcome.

  1. had shouted

  2. are shouting

  3. shouted

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Case of parallelism. Here we need, second form of the verb to follow the verbs 'waved' and 'cheered'.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

He gasped, he panted and was collapsing on the floor.

  1. collapsed

  2. had collapsed

  3. has collapsed

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of parallelism. Here we need, second form of the verb to follow the verbs 'gasped' and 'panted'.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

He was a simple, modest and unassuming person; though we all respected him.

  1. but

  2. and

  3. as

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

“Though” is a conjunction which is used to make contrast. Here there is no contrast involved. Rather there is continuation of the same idea. Hence, (2) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The sweet, melodious music came to a close; but there was thunderous applause.

  1. and

  2. yet

  3. though

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The given sentence belongs to the structure of a compound sentence and “though” is a conjunction which is used to make complex sentences falling under the clause of comparison And is the correct word to make the given sentence a compound sentence. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Some are born great, some achieve greatness and some are greatness thrust upon him.

  1. have

  2. has

  3. had

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The word “are” has been used wrongly. Besides, “greatness” is a noun which does not suit here as there is no other main verb in the given sentence. The use of “have” satisfies this condition. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

The proposition before the house is this; if we want peace, we must have prepared for war.

  1. must be prepared

  2. must be preparing

  3. must prepared

  4. No improvement required


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

To make the passive voice of this sentence, the auxiliary “be” must be added after 'must' and (1) satisfies this condition. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

There was no harm done to the car except that the windscreen cracked.

  1. was cracked

  2. is cracked

  3. was being cracked

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of passive voive. 'Was/were + third form of the verb' is the usage required. Thus, option 1.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

When Mrs. and Mr. Rockefeller came, we hosted dinner on which the mayor was also present.

  1. at which

  2. to which

  3. by which

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Here 'dinner' shows a specific function or time. The correct preposition to be used is “at”. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Not only the crops, but also cattle and sheep was destroyed.

  1. were destroyed

  2. was also destroyed

  3. had also destroyed

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of coordinative conjunction. 'Not only' takes 'but also' with it. Cattle and sheep being a plural subject need a plural auxiliary. Thus, option 1.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

You must not repeat this, yet you will be dismissed.

  1. otherwise

  2. if

  3. whether

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

In the given sentence, a wrong conjunction has been used as it is mostly preceded by the conjunction 'although'. The given sentence serves a sort of working to the doer, so the conjunction “other wise” is correct. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence is given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

As soon as the thief ran out of the jail, the guard was firing at him.

  1. fired

  2. is firing

  3. was fired

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Case of parallelism in past indefinite tense. If the principal clause is in the past indefinite, trhe subordinate clause must also be in the same tense.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence three possible substitutions are given for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Kerala is more thickly populated than other states in India.

  1. any other state

  2. no other state

  3. every other state

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

This structure of the sentence belongs to the chapter “Transformation” under the sub-clause “Change of degrees.” The given sentence is a change from a superlative degree to a comparative degree and “any other” is best suited followed by a singular noun. Hence, (1) is the correct answer.

Directions: Look at the underlined part of the sentence. Below the sentence are given three possible substitutions for the underlined part. If one of the possible substitutions is better than the underlined part, indicate it as your answer. If none of the substitutions improves the sentence, indicate (4) as your answer.

Iron is more useful than any other metal.

  1. every other metal

  2. other metals

  3. all metals

  4. No improvement needed


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

This structure of sentence belongs to the chapter “Transformation” under the sub-clause “Change of degrees.” The given sentence is a change from a superlative degree to a comparative degree and “any other” is best suited followed by a singular noun. Hence, (4) is the correct answer.

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