Sentence Improvement (D)

Description: Sentence Improvement (D)
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Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

It was the favorite place of my dog who loved running alongside my car over the ancient bridge.

  1. alongside my car over the ancient bridge.

  2. besides my car over the ancient bridge.

  3. along my car over the ancient bridge.

  4. beside my car on ancient bridge.

  5. in the side of my car on the ancient bridge.


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The sentence is grammatically correct. Use of ‘alongside’ is correct. The bridge is ‘over’ a gulf, so ‘over the bridge’ is also correct expression.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Like the import of coal in vast quantities by power companies, the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competition of steel companies, and leave them at the mercy of wild swings in international prices and supply disruptions.

  1. the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competition of steel companies, and leave them at the mercy of wild swings in international prices and supply disruptions.

  2. the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competitiveness of steel companies, and leave them at the mercy of wild swings in international prices and supply disruptions.

  3. the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competition of steel companies, and leave them at the mercy of wildly swings in international prices and supply disruptions.

  4. the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competitiveness of steel companies, and leave them in the mercy of wild swings in international prices and supply disruptions.

  5. the slow rise in imports of iron ore could erode the competition of steel companies, and left them at the mercy of wild swings in international prices and supply disruptions.


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

What could be eroded is not 'competition' but 'competitiveness'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Hovercraft, or air-cushion vehicles, are unusual because they travel over land and water on a layer of air.

  1. are unusual because they travel over land and water on a layer of air

  2. are unusual since they travel over land and water on a layer of air

  3. is unusual because it travels over land and water on a layer of air

  4. are unusual in that they travel over land and water on a layer of air

  5. is unusual as they travel over land and water on a layer of air


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

This option clarifies that they are unusual in a certain respect, not unusual because.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Not till a baby kangaroo is four month old, does it begin to live outside its mother's pouch.

  1. Not till a baby kangaroo is four month old, does it begin to live outside its mother's pouch.

  2. Not till a baby kangaroo is four month old, it begins to live outside its mother's pouch.

  3. Not until a baby kangaroo is four month old, does it begin to live outside its mother's pouch.

  4. Not till a baby kangaroo is four months old, does it begin to live outside its mother's pouch.

  5. Not until a baby kangaroo is four month old, it begins living outside its mother's pouch.


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Not till is used for a condition to be performed in an assertive sense and in future; until is used as a prohibition, hence until is correct.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Although it cannot be denied that genetic make-up and parental guidance play an important role in a child's evolution, environmental factors have at least as important a role to play in a child's overall development.

  1. environmental factors have at least as important a role to play in a child's overall development

  2. it is also dependent upon environmental factors that have at least as important a role to play

  3. factors from a child's environment have at least as important a role to play in a child's overall development

  4. how environmental factors play out have at least as important a role to play in a child's development as the other two factors enumerated

  5. environmental factors are at least as important for a child's overall development


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Correct. The sentence is correct in its existing format.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Given the religious idea as already existing, in what way, and to what extent has its development been affected by forces that are not in themselves religious, and which modern thought definitely separates from religion?

  1. and to what extent has its development been affected by forces that are not in themselves religious,

  2. and to what extent has their development been affected by forces that are not in themselves religious,

  3. and to some extent has its development been affected by forces that are not in themselves religious,

  4. but to what extent has its development been affected by forces that are not in themselves religious,

  5. and to what extent has its development been effected by forces that are not in themselves religious,


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The sentence is correct as given.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Simon enjoyed some minutes of happiness, of that languor which follows weeping, and felt inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine.

  1. Simon enjoyed some minutes of happiness, of that languor which follows weeping, and felt inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine.

  2. Simon felt inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine; he enjoyed some minutes of happiness, of that languor which follows weeping,

  3. Simon enjoyed some of that languor which follows weeping, some minutes of happiness and felt inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine.

  4. Inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine, Simon enjoyed some minutes of happiness and some of that languor which follows weeping,

  5. Simon enjoyed some minutes of happiness, and felt inclined to fall asleep there upon the grass in the warm sunshine to enjoy some moments of that languor which follows weeping.


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The sentence is correct as given. It maintains correct grammatical structure and correct sequence of events.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Critics say LMB Corporation is overly focused on service delivery and not enough on sales; that it is slavish to preserving margins at the expense of winning new business; that its core service offerings differ little from those of the competition.

  1. overly focused on service delivery and not enough on sales; that it is slavish to preserving margins at the expense of winning new business; that its core service offerings differ little from those of the competition.

  2. overly focused on service delivery and not enough on sales; that it is slavish to preserving margins at the expense of winning newly business; that its core service offerings differ little from those of the competition.

  3. overly focused on service delivery and not enough on sales; that it is slavish to preserving margins at the expense of winning new business; that it's core service offerings differ little from those of the competition.

  4. overly focused on service delivery and not enough on sales; that it is slavish to preserving margins at the expense of winning new business; that its core service offerings differently little from those of the competition.


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

(1) The given statement is grammatically correct. (2) is incorrect because of wrong usage of 'newly' in place of 'new'. (3) is incorrect because of a punctuation error (it's has been used in place of its). (4) is incorrect because of wrong adverbial usage (differently in place of different). (5) is incorrect because of faulty parallel construction (correct is 'overly focused…not enough')

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Louis Vuitton, the French designer house, is known for its chic yet practical designs like the legendary durability of LV suitcase, which was showcased in the movie 'Three Kings'.

  1. is known for its chic yet practical designs like the legendary durability of LV suitcase, which was

  2. known for its chic yet practical designs such as the legendary durability of LV suitcase, was

  3. is known for its chic yet practical designs such as that of the legendarily durable LV suitcase, which was

  4. is known for its chic yet practical designs such as that of the legendary durability of the LV suitcase that was

  5. manufactures the legendarily durable LV suitcase, and is known for its chic yet durable designs


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes the error of incorrect comparison by using 'such as' offer an instance of chic design. Because the design cannot be showcased but the product can be, it makes LV suitcase the noun that is modified by the last (modifying) clause.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Although steeped in sense of duty when constituted, sports administration bodies have lost most of their idealism, which has resulted in a sporting culture that some sportspeople claimed to favor sycophancy.

  1. which has resulted in a sporting culture that some sportspeople claimed to favor sycophancy

  2. which resulted in a sporting culture that some sportspeople claimed favored sycophancy

  3. resulting in a sporting culture that some sportspeople claim favors sycophancy

  4. as a result of which, a sporting culture favoring sycophancy has emerged, claim some sportspeople

  5. resultantly, a sporting culture favoring sycophancy emerged, claim some sportspeople


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

Correct. The option removes Modifier Error by replacing 'which' with 'resulting in'. Also, the option uses Simple Present to follow up an ongoing action.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Let two separate portions of tea leaves be macerated by precisely the same processes in similar and separate vessels, the one containing harder and the other softer water, either hotter or cooler, the infusion made with the soft water will have by far a strongest taste, although it possesses less colour than the infusion made with the hard water.

  1. the one containing harder and the other softer water, either hotter or cooler, the infusion made with the soft water will have by far a strongest taste,

  2. one containing hard water and other soft, either hotter (or) colder the infusion made with the soft water will have the strongest taste.

  3. one containing hard or soft water, either hot or cold, the infusion made with soft water will have the strongest taste.

  4. one containing hard water and the other soft, either hot or cold; the infusion made with soft water will have a stronger taste.

  5. one containing hard water and other soft, either hot or cold, the infusion made with soft water will have the strongest taste.


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

corrects the error of article 'the', as well as the error of degree of adjective: comparative 'stronger' in place of superlative ' strongest'.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

A typical problem in many marriages occurs when spouses stray due to boredom and blasé and lose the trust positioned in them by their partner.

  1. occurs when spouses stray due to boredom and blasé and lose the trust positioned in them by their partner

  2. occurs when spouses stray due to boredom and blasé, and lose the trust positioned in them by their partners

  3. occurs when spouses stray due to boredom and blasé, and it causes them to lose the trust positioned in them by their partners

  4. occurs when spouses stray due to boredom and blasé, and thereby lose the trust positioned in them by their partners


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

Correct; removes the error of punctuation by placing a comma to separate the two clauses and establishes a clear cause and effect relationship between the two clauses.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The most recent National Conference of Mathematics Teachers addressed the problem of convincing students who rely on calculators that the ability to calculate mentally or with pencil and paper is important.

  1. The most recent National Conference of Mathematics Teachers addressed the problem of convincing students who

  2. The most recent problem faced by the National Conference of Mathematics Teachers was convincing students who

  3. The most recent National Conference of Mathematics Teachers addressed the problem of convincing students whom

  4. Most recently, the National Conference of Mathematics Teachers addressed the problem of convincing students who

  5. The most recent National Conference of Mathematics Teachers sought to address the problem of convincing students who


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The most recent' here means the latest.

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The memory cards used in the latest digital cameras differ from those used in older cameras because the latest ones are more compact yet can store a lot more pictures.

  1. differ from those used in older cameras because the latest ones are more

  2. are different to the ones used in older cameras because they are more

  3. differ from those used in older cameras because they are more

  4. are different than those used in older cameras because the latest ones are more

  5. differ from older cameras in that they are


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

Correct. The sentence is correct in its existing format.

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