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In context, which of the following sentences would best fit between sentences 4 and 5?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

[1] Art probably owes more to form for its range of expression than to color. [2] Many of the noblest things it is capable of conveying are expressed by form more directly than by anything else. [3] And it is interesting to notice how some of the world's greatest artists have been very restricted in their use of color, preferring to depend on form for their chief appeal. [4] It is reported that Apelles only used three colors, black, red, and yellow, and Rembrandt used little else. [5] Drawing, although the first, is also the last thing the painter usually studies. [6] There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort. [7] A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art. [8] It is not enough in artistic drawing to portray accurately. [9] But to express any form one must first be moved by it. [10] There is in the appearance of all objects, animate and inanimate, a hidden rhythm that is not caught by the accurate, painstaking, but cold artist. [11] This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph. [12] You are never moved to say when looking at one, "What fine form." [13] It is difficult to say in what this quality consists. [14] The emphasis and selection that is unconsciously given in a drawing, done directly under the guidance of strong feeling, are too subtle to be tabulated. [15] But it is this selection of the significant and suppression of the non-essential that often gives to a few lines drawn quickly, and having a somewhat remote relation to the complex appearance of the real object, more vitality and truth than are to be found in a highly-wrought and painstaking drawing, during the process of which the essential and vital things have been lost sight of in the labor of the work; and the non-essential, which is usually more obvious, is allowed to creep in and obscure the original impression.

  1. Color would seem to depend much more on a natural sense and would be less amenable to teaching.

  2. Every painter should learn about both color and drawing.

  3. Color depends more on natural sense whereas drawing requires effort as it is difficult to understand and learn.

  4. A majority of artists focus more on drawing than on color.

  5. But it was Appelles alone who used three colors; all the other artists used more colors in their paintings.


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

(3) Sentence (4) quotes painters who used fewer colors. Sentence (5) states that drawing is the first and last thing that a painter studies. The intervening sentence ought to state that color is more a matter of choice and drawing more a matter of learning.

What is the best way to deal with sentence 9?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

[1] Art probably owes more to form for its range of expression than to color. [2] Many of the noblest things it is capable of conveying are expressed by form more directly than by anything else. [3] And it is interesting to notice how some of the world's greatest artists have been very restricted in their use of color, preferring to depend on form for their chief appeal. [4] It is reported that Apelles only used three colors, black, red, and yellow, and Rembrandt used little else. [5] Drawing, although the first, is also the last thing the painter usually studies. [6] There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort. [7] A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art. [8] It is not enough in artistic drawing to portray accurately. [9] But to express any form one must first be moved by it. [10] There is in the appearance of all objects, animate and inanimate, a hidden rhythm that is not caught by the accurate, painstaking, but cold artist. [11] This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph. [12] You are never moved to say when looking at one, "What fine form." [13] It is difficult to say in what this quality consists. [14] The emphasis and selection that is unconsciously given in a drawing, done directly under the guidance of strong feeling, are too subtle to be tabulated. [15] But it is this selection of the significant and suppression of the non-essential that often gives to a few lines drawn quickly, and having a somewhat remote relation to the complex appearance of the real object, more vitality and truth than are to be found in a highly-wrought and painstaking drawing, during the process of which the essential and vital things have been lost sight of in the labor of the work; and the non-essential, which is usually more obvious, is allowed to creep in and obscure the original impression.

  1. Leave it as it is

  2. Connect it to sentence 8 by inserting “as” in place of “but”

  3. Connect it to sentence 10 by inserting “since”

  4. Delete it


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

(2) Sentence (9) explains sentence (8).

Which phrase, if inserted at the beginning of sentence 11 (reproduced below), best fits the context? This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

[1] Art probably owes more to form for its range of expression than to color. [2] Many of the noblest things it is capable of conveying are expressed by form more directly than by anything else. [3] And it is interesting to notice how some of the world's greatest artists have been very restricted in their use of color, preferring to depend on form for their chief appeal. [4] It is reported that Apelles only used three colors, black, red, and yellow, and Rembrandt used little else. [5] Drawing, although the first, is also the last thing the painter usually studies. [6] There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort. [7] A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art. [8] It is not enough in artistic drawing to portray accurately. [9] But to express any form one must first be moved by it. [10] There is in the appearance of all objects, animate and inanimate, a hidden rhythm that is not caught by the accurate, painstaking, but cold artist. [11] This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph. [12] You are never moved to say when looking at one, "What fine form." [13] It is difficult to say in what this quality consists. [14] The emphasis and selection that is unconsciously given in a drawing, done directly under the guidance of strong feeling, are too subtle to be tabulated. [15] But it is this selection of the significant and suppression of the non-essential that often gives to a few lines drawn quickly, and having a somewhat remote relation to the complex appearance of the real object, more vitality and truth than are to be found in a highly-wrought and painstaking drawing, during the process of which the essential and vital things have been lost sight of in the labor of the work; and the non-essential, which is usually more obvious, is allowed to creep in and obscure the original impression.

  1. Thus,

  2. However,

  3. In fact,

  4. Also

  5. And actually


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

(4) Sentence 10 is about a hidden rhythm, not caught by cold artist. Sentence 11 adds that this rhythm is also not available in a mechanical reproduction like a photo graph.

Of the following, which is the best way to revise the underlined portion of sentence 6 (reproduced below)?

There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

[1] Art probably owes more to form for its range of expression than to color. [2] Many of the noblest things it is capable of conveying are expressed by form more directly than by anything else. [3] And it is interesting to notice how some of the world's greatest artists have been very restricted in their use of color, preferring to depend on form for their chief appeal. [4] It is reported that Apelles only used three colors, black, red, and yellow, and Rembrandt used little else. [5] Drawing, although the first, is also the last thing the painter usually studies. [6] There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort. [7] A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art. [8] It is not enough in artistic drawing to portray accurately. [9] But to express any form one must first be moved by it. [10] There is in the appearance of all objects, animate and inanimate, a hidden rhythm that is not caught by the accurate, painstaking, but cold artist. [11] This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph. [12] You are never moved to say when looking at one, "What fine form." [13] It is difficult to say in what this quality consists. [14] The emphasis and selection that is unconsciously given in a drawing, done directly under the guidance of strong feeling, are too subtle to be tabulated. [15] But it is this selection of the significant and suppression of the non-essential that often gives to a few lines drawn quickly, and having a somewhat remote relation to the complex appearance of the real object, more vitality and truth than are to be found in a highly-wrought and painstaking drawing, during the process of which the essential and vital things have been lost sight of in the labor of the work; and the non-essential, which is usually more obvious, is allowed to creep in and obscure the original impression.

  1. That can be taught and that requires constant application and effort

  2. Delete “that” after “and”

  3. Replace “that” after “it” with “than”

  4. Replace “that” at both places with “which”

  5. Replace “and” by “but”


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

(3) The comparative “more” should be followed by “than”.

In context, which of the following is the best way to phrase sentence 7 (reproduced below)?

A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

[1] Art probably owes more to form for its range of expression than to color. [2] Many of the noblest things it is capable of conveying are expressed by form more directly than by anything else. [3] And it is interesting to notice how some of the world's greatest artists have been very restricted in their use of color, preferring to depend on form for their chief appeal. [4] It is reported that Apelles only used three colors, black, red, and yellow, and Rembrandt used little else. [5] Drawing, although the first, is also the last thing the painter usually studies. [6] There is more in it that can be taught and that requires constant application and effort. [7] A student should set himself to acquire well-trained eye of which he might be capable of; for the appreciation of every form of art. [8] It is not enough in artistic drawing to portray accurately. [9] But to express any form one must first be moved by it. [10] There is in the appearance of all objects, animate and inanimate, a hidden rhythm that is not caught by the accurate, painstaking, but cold artist. [11] This form is never found in a mechanical reproduction like a photograph. [12] You are never moved to say when looking at one, "What fine form." [13] It is difficult to say in what this quality consists. [14] The emphasis and selection that is unconsciously given in a drawing, done directly under the guidance of strong feeling, are too subtle to be tabulated. [15] But it is this selection of the significant and suppression of the non-essential that often gives to a few lines drawn quickly, and having a somewhat remote relation to the complex appearance of the real object, more vitality and truth than are to be found in a highly-wrought and painstaking drawing, during the process of which the essential and vital things have been lost sight of in the labor of the work; and the non-essential, which is usually more obvious, is allowed to creep in and obscure the original impression.

  1. As it is now.

  2. A well-trained eye for the appreciation of form is what every student should set himself to acquire with all the might of which he is capable.

  3. To appreciate every form of art, all the students should acquire well trained eyes which they might be capable of.

  4. Only well-trained eyes appreciate every form of art and this is what every student requires to learn drawing.

  5. All the well-trained eyes appreciate every form of art and all the students should strive to achieve them.


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Sentence 7 has an error of double usage (of) and lacks coherence.

Which of the following, if placed after sentence (14), will be the most effective concluding sentence for the passage?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. So who do you think is the culprit?

  2. So who is gracious and mannerly ultimately?

  3. So the shoe is on the other foot.

  4. So who will judge the 'civility'?

  5. So let us introspect.


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

The essay begins with the 'urban' viewpoint of the 'rustic'. It ends with what might be the countryman's viewpoint of the city folk. The urban viewpoint is shown in negative light, but the rural viewpoint is condescending. So who is truly civilized?

Which of the following could be inserted at the beginning of sentence (14) to clarify the relationship between sentences (13) and (14) below?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. Therefore,

  2. And

  3. Although

  4. And then

  5. And yet


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

'Although' the view will surely not be flattering, yet (or 'and yet' in case of a new sentence) the rustic has the civility.

What is the best way to deal with sentence (12)?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. Leave it as it is

  2. Place it before sentence 11

  3. Delete it altogether

  4. Change 'did' to 'does'

  5. Change 'uptown' to 'urban'


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

The sentence should be in the present tense.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence no. (5) below?

The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. NO CHANGE

  2. The mere and naked material of nature we eye with indifference,

  3. The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in deference.

  4. The mere and naked material of nature we eye with deference.

  5. The naked material of nature we eye with indifference,


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

The appropriate word here is 'indifference' and not 'in difference'.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence no. (8) below? how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. Change commas (,) to semi-colons (;)

  2. Change period (.) to mark of interrogation (?)

  3. Change period (.) to mark of exclamation (!)

  4. Delete repetitive 'how'

  5. No change needed


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

The sentence is correct as given.

Which of the following best replaces the word 'this' in sentence (6)?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. The student's performance

  2. The recommendation

  3. The interview

  4. The examination system

  5. The rote learning


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

'Guides to passing examination' is the clue.

Which of the following, if placed after sentence (11), will be the most effective concluding sentence for the passage?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. The sooner we find a way to dispense with these, the better it is for the student community and the system at large.

  2. But isn't examination system the real culprit?

  3. Yet, we have to give the devil its due.

  4. They should all be replaced by text books.

  5. They do render some help otherwise.


Correct Option: A
Explanation:

The author has already made the recommendation in sentence (8). The sooner we act on the suggestion, the better. He does not give study notes any credit. That rules out (3) and (5). He doesn't blame the examination system, nor is there any reference to text books.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence no. (2) below? and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. and students helped to recognize their difficulties and overcome it.

  2. and the students helped to recognize their difficulties and overcome it.

  3. and a student helped to recognize his many a difficulty and overcome it.

  4. and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome them.

  5. and students helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome them.


Correct Option: D
Explanation:

The noun of the objective case is plural 'difficulties'. The related pronoun should also be plural 'them'.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence no. (7) below? No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil.

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing the answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) There is something humbling to human pride in a rustic life. (2) It grates against the heart to think of the tone in which we unconsciously permit ourselves to address a rustic. (3) We see in him humanity in its simplest state. (4) It is a sad thought to feel that we despise him; that all we respect in our species is what has been created by art; the gaudy dress, the glittering equipage, or even the cultivated intellect. (5) The mere and naked material of nature we eye with in difference, or trample on with disdain. (6) Poor child of toil, from the gray dawn to the setting sun one long test of endurance. (7) No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond those that suffice to make him the machine of others, the serf of the hard soil. (8) And then too, mark how we frown upon his scanty holidays, how we hedge in his mirth, and how we turn hilarity into crime. (9) We make the whole of the gay world, wherein we take our snares and perils to him a place of pleasure. (10) Do we not mistake the idyllic, unaffected rustic charm for uncouth, inelegant artlessness? (11) Why not look upon the whole issue from the other angle – the viewpoint of the ‘observed’? (12) How did the rustic view the uptown gentry? (13) The view will surely not be very flattering. (14) The ‘rustic’ has the civility to ‘waive off’ such ‘reckless’ opinions about the urban folk and restrict himself to the upkeep of values only on his own part.

  1. No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond that that suffice

  2. No idea elicited, no thought awakened beyond that that suffice

  3. No ideas elicited, no thought awakened beyond what suffice

  4. No ideas elicited, no thoughts awakened beyond what suffices

  5. No ideas elicited, no thoughts awakened beyond those that suffice


Correct Option: E
Explanation:

(5) Ideas are in plural. Thoughts also ought to be in plural, to go with the use of plural demonstrative pronoun 'those'.

Which word/phrase, if inserted at the beginning of sentence (11), can help combine sentences (10) and (11)?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. and yet

  2. although

  3. in spite of

  4. despite that

  5. and so


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

They are priced high although they are worth nothing.

Which of the following is the best revision of the underlined portion of sentence no. (1) below?

Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. Researchers in education has of recent years turned their attention to

  2. Researchers in education have of recent years turned their attention to

  3. Research in education has in recent years turned its attention to

  4. Research in education has of recent years turned attention to

  5. Researchers in education have in recent years turned its attention to


Correct Option: C
Explanation:

(3) correctly changes 'of recent years' to 'in recent years'.

In context, what is the best way to deal with sentence (3)?

Directions for the question:

The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten.
Read the passage and select the best answer for the question that follows. Keep in mind that some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask to consider organization and development. In choosing answer, follow the requirements of standard written English.

(1) Research in education has of recent years turned its attention to the problem of assessing a student’s progress as accurately as possible. (2) Only when this is done, can a meaningful course of study be laid down and a student helped to recognize his difficulties and overcome it. (3) But, despite all the new thinking on this subject, there is still no acceptable alternative to the examination. (4) There have been remarkable advances in analyzing the process of learning and in framing tests and maintaining week to week records which provide the teacher with valuable information about the progress of his class and of each individual in it. (5) Whether it be at the end of term, or the year, or at the end of a school course or for the purpose of choosing candidates for a course of study and training, the only practicable way of measuring a student’s performance or of assessing his potential is by an examination, supplemented where necessary, by recommendation, interview and other devices.

(6) The most unfortunate by-product of this has been the proliferation of study notes, guides to passing examination, model answers, hints for writing essays and similar travesties of education. (7) There is no need to engage on the unethical nature of these publications. (8) From the student’s point of view a rigorous censorship of this kind of publication would be a great advantage. (9) For one thing these ‘notes’ promote the habit of rote learning. (10) For the other, they are priced more highly than the poems of Wordsworth or the plays of Shakespeare. (11) They are not worth the paper they are printed on.
  1. Move it between sentences (1) and (2)

  2. Move it between sentences (4) and (5)

  3. Delete it altogether

  4. Move it to the beginning of the second paragraph

  5. No change required


Correct Option: B
Explanation:

Sentence (3) is actually a logical continuation of sentence (4). Likewise, sentence (5) is a logical continuation of sentence (3).

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